Sunday, July 17, 2005

The Open Closet

She lay under her covers, shaking. The covers were pulled all the way up her face and she peered over the edge of them, toward the closet door.

It was open, just a little. And she knew what was behind it. What had always been behind it, for as long as she could remember. The reason she never went in there, why her mom still needed to get her coat for her. She knew what lived in her closet.

She knew, and she called her dad anyway.

"What is it, princess?" he asked softly as he came in. "Did you have a bad dream?"

Hardly. She'd woken from a particularly lovely dream, only to find... it perched at the end of her bed. It had been staring at her, like it often did. She usually closed her eyes and it would go away. It had only ever just watched her. But this time it had spoken to her. It told her to scream.

She'd screamed for her daddy. And now he was here, and she knew why it had told her to scream.

"Nuh-no, Daddy," she said, trying to calm down. If she could keep him away from the closet, maybe even get him to take her back to bed with him and mom.

The closet door creaked. Her dad looked over at it.

"Aw, was it this creaky old door? No, honey, look," he opened the door wide, looking back at her. "It's just your close--"

He was pulled up into the closet. She heard a muffled scream and his feet kicking the wall of the closet and then nothing.

She lay in the dark for a very long time, and nothing happened. She sobbed silently and tears streamed down her face. She wanted her mother. Wanted her so badly but didn't dare call her.

Then, it came out the top of her closet, skittering across her ceiling and down the wall behind her bed. It sat perched on the wall above her head, reached down and roughly wiped her tears away with a scaly dry thumb. Her sobs increased, and she clutched the covers to her.

It climbed down over her to the foot of her bed, where it perched again and told her to do something else. Then it crawled down under her bed. It lay under her bed, directly beneath her and talked to her. Whispered horrible things. Told her it had her daddy under there with it. And that he might still be alive.

So she screamed. Screamed for her mother.

11 comments:

Hope-So said...

You know...I'm TRYING to stay out of the darkness with my writing. And here I go into your closet. Damn you Chris.
Excellent story though.
I was bummed you only commented about wearing a belt with jeans.
I was so proud of my story before that.
I may actually throw you into that little girls closet if you are not careful....

Rob said...

I thought of writing a similar piece. Interesting...

Kat said...

Very dark. But interesting.

Chris said...

Glad you guys liked the story. I was actually scaring myself as I was writing it, which was kind of fun.

And Hope, my apologies. :) I have since rectified the situation. In fact, I'll go one better and offer a plug: Everyone go over to Hope's blog and read her story. It really is definitely worth the trip. She has a knack for imagery and allegory that shows in her latest post.

Lisa said...

damn you to hell!!!! I am sitting in a completely dark basement, husband on business trip, memories of sleepless nights as a child--due to just such imagined events.

good thing there was a light switch close by. and even better that I have learned to repress those wild beasts from sliding out of my head and into the shadows of my room...if you give me nightmares I'll, I'll...er...I'll hold a grudge for like, 5 minutes--maybe 6. damn you.

Hope-So said...

Chris- You are the MAN!!! XOXO

Chris said...

Hugs and kisses right back at you, Hope.

And sorry, Lisa. If it's any consolation, I was also alone in the dark while writing it.

akropp said...

hey chris, do you have any full fledged stories online or just these smaller ones? i'd love to read them if they exist

Chris said...

Akropp, the closest thing I have right now are the sites for my various comic books, under the "Proper Stories" heading.

The Pagan City link has the most material to read at the moment, with archives of the first 3 1/2 issues.

The Hemisphere Studios link has a short preview of The Defender, and other information for that book as well as Power of the Five Archetypes. Both books are currently in production and will be available for sale as soon as they're done.

The Platinum Studios link doesn't have much to read, but has some information about the two books I wrote for them, Meet the Haunteds and Warrior's Honor. I have no control over when they'll be on sale, but I'm hoping it's soon.

And, before I forget, thanks very much for your interest in my work.

Rae Ann said...

Scary!! But delicious!

akropp said...

cool, i'll check em out. btw, just call me anton.